Good picture, but their are couple of things you should work on... I don't like the way you detailed the fur. It looks more like scales and isn't very appealing... The body does not have the best anatomy. I believe the heads are alright, although a little too big. You should really watch yourself with legs and arms. Look at a reference to get a better idea how they are structured. The paws are way to huge... They should be smaller. Much smaller. The dog doesn't look right to me. The body doesn't appeal to me much. I don't how to describe it though. The back legs should look closer together too, both of them. It looks like their standing or floating and not lying down... The dog looks like she's in sumo wrestling of some sort.
I do like how you did the shading for the fur. You need to watch out how you use it though. The lines are nice. I like how you didn't use the black lines, even though their are a few. The pillow is nice too, but looks a little flat and should be shaded more so you can tell that are actually lying on it.
Anyway, hopefully I wasn't to harsh... Overall, I don't like the drawing very much... It may just be me, but you have to consider everybody's perspective if you want to improve. I'm not very good at critiques, so excuse me if I didn't explain something very well. Don't be afraid to ask if you didn't understand.
As for the anatomy, it's not suppose to be realistic anatomy, but thanks anyway. If you want to critise any of my anatomy practice here --> [link][link][link] that be great.
The fur hasn't been finished yet I plan to make it look more like strands of fur later on, I agree it looks to scaly but of course I have a lot more hours left with this picture, it is only a work in progress.
The pillow I agree with you, I'll add more to the pillow later.
d-dileoneFeatured By OwnerJul 23, 2011Student General Artist
Love it, love it, love it.
Now that I look at it, I'd maybe add more detailing inside those fur details, or make them smaller. However, I don't know. I have to wait and see what it loosk like when you finish detailing - I'm sure it will look better.
And I thought at first Kitmit had a giant bow, but it was just her collar and her pillow. Maybe darken the pillow a little if possible? Other than that, it's beautiful
Also, I might add that I am in love with how you did the fur texture... especially with paint, let alone a touch pad. I know what it's like to use a touchpad... that's basically all I could use 'till I could a tablet. Very amazing work.